Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Super Short Post is Super Short

[Author's Note: Just a super short little blurb about computer that I thought up just now. I went through several versions of this, starting with a mirror and ending with a spy. This was the version I liked best. If you guys want to hear the other versions, though, tell me and I'll post them.]


A computer is a double agent.
Though it gives you the means to break the rules,
It's also the one to inform your superiors.

3 comments:

  1. This is a cool piece because when I was reading it was over before I knew it. I really like it because it's so true. It makes me want to say to make it longer but then you might lose the whole point of it so I don't know but great job anyway.

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  2. Oh, Jordan. XD This is sooo true, and I remember you working on this quote/poem type thing. Kudos to you for putting it up here.

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  3. If you guys want me to make it longer, I can do the next best thing and add some of the other versions I came up with. Like I said there are quite a few other versions, but I thought this was the version that got the point across best. If I post the other ones, thought, it could show some other angles of this point of view. And also show some reasons why I think some people should have their internet priviledges revoked altogther.

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