Name: Ana Greyson
Hometown: Ourabon, Kyana in Arctisia
Directive: Wolf Trainer/Warrior
Ana was the kind of girl that did what she did and no one could say a thing about it. You could think whatever you wanted about her and she'd just grin, roll her eyes, and go on with her life. Of course, there were plenty of things about Ana that just made you wonder about that girl. First and foremost was the fact that, no matter how hot or cold it was, she'd always wear a fur-trimmed skirt and short sleeved shirt and her hands were always covered by a pair of blue and white gloves. That wouldn't have been very odd if she'd lived in a warmer area, but for a person living in the tundra of Arctisia, that wouldn't have been nearly warm enough. That didn't stop Ana, though, and Ana's quirks didn't stop at her clothes either. Ana was famous throughout Arctisia for the students she trained; wolves. Ana ran a special academy that trained wolves in several fields, from warrior training to delivering important messages, and not just any messages either. The messages Ana's wolves delivered were of the most top secret, important kind, the kind that was written in code and was hidden while being delivered. There were plenty of theories about why Ana was so successful in training her wolves; most were centered around the wolf ears that poked through her white hair and the fluffy gray tail that trailed behind her that led most people to thinking that she was part wolf. Yes, there were plenty of things that people thought of Ana but hardly anyone dared say them to her face; everyone knew that Ana knew karate, but no one knew Ana would never use it on someone because of what they think. All in all, Ana was a girl you never forgot, and everybody loved her.
This is basically a rough draft of a description of a person who's in the story I'm planning on writing someday. That day is definitely not today. I fail today. Also, Ourabon is a town, Kyana is the island the town is in, and Arctisia is the country that the island is in. I'm working on a picture for the description. I'll try to upload it when it's done.
ReplyDeleteThis was different but it was good. I liked how you used a lot of adjectives to describe Ana.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described her. You used very mature words that made her sound facsinating
ReplyDeletei think this is a really good start to a longer story, good job
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this it is obvious you are a magnificent creative writer and you can really chisel those skills and make you a very very good writer. I really enjoyed this piece.
ReplyDeleteLike everyone else said, you are a very creative writer and I think that you should continue to write this story you are working on because many people like this sort of genre. I think that if you keep working on vocabulary, this piece could become even stronger, and with the rest of you pieces also. Good job, Skye Lunus! :)
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